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Alone in the Woods

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"This way, this way!" giggled Alice, pulling me along. She led me closer and closer to the woods.
"Um, Alice," I said, "are you sure this is all right? I mean, you're beautiful and I'd love to make love with you, but did it have to be under these conditions? Are you sure you wouldn't want to just go to my house or something? My parents are gone and all."
"Oh, gosh no, silly," she said. "Where's the thrill in that? If we're going to engage in our primitive instincts, then why not act like our primitive ancestors? They didn't have beds either, you know!"
I sighed. Well, whatever. I mean, you should have seen my shock when Alice, the most beautiful girl in school, asked me to go out with her today. Sure, it was a stereotypical "I've always loved you, please go out with me," affair, but for her to initiate it was just... And I mean, I had never talked to her at all before. But she just left a note in my locker to meet her out under the tree, and that was that.
And of course, she wanted to make love with me as soon as I said yes. I'd like to think it was because of my stud like body, but I have to admit - Alice did have a bit of a reputation as a slut in our school. A clean one, sure, but still, I don't think I know of many popular boys in the school who haven't been in bed with her.
"Alice," I asked, "I think we're far in enough so that nobody is going to see us. Come on, we can't just keep going like this! We're going to get lost!"
She turned around and smiled. "Isn't that part of the fun?" she asked. "Imagine, you and I in the middle of the woods, alone, hoping for someone to find us. We'd be alone, sure, but we'd be together. Nobody could interrupt our love. Nobody could interrupt me finding more about you."
This girl was a bit... Well, whatever. I just nodded and let her continue to lead me through the woods.
As we continued, the undergrowth became thicker and thicker, making our going slower and slower. I wonder if I'd be able to get home tonight at this rate? I mean, heck, Alice insisted so hard on us waiting until nightfall to engage on our adventure in lust (taking her own words) that I was almost falling asleep by now. If she had just wanted a normal time, we could've been done and learning about each other already.
"Ah, here we are," she said, as we came to a clearing. "A perfect spot."
I looked on the ground. "Um," I said, "there's a ton of underbrush there. Don't you think it's going to be uncomfortable?"
She smiled. "Perhaps." She flung her arms around me, and I around her. I could feel her soft bosom on my chest. She started to nibble on my neck, softly. I could already feel myself getting aroused. And then...
CHOMP!
I screeched in pain as her nibbles turned into one solid bite. But it wasn't for long as the pain in my neck suddenly became a source of pleasure. I felt an ecstasy flow through my body like nothing I had ever felt before. This was better than the drugs I took a few nights ago. This was better than sex. This was just...
I lost the words to describe it. The pleasure rushed straight to my head, and my vision blurred. By the time I even thought to regain my composure, I could see no more.
I opened my eyes slowly. "Another one?" asked a lady. "What is this, the fourth this month?"
"But mom," said a girl who sounded like Alice, "this one is different, I promise! I mean, just look at how big they got!"
"You call that big?" said the mom. "You need your eyes checked! Well, whatever. If she can pass the test, you can keep her and move out of here."
"Yay!" said Alice happily. "Watch, I'll show you!"
"Ugh..." I said in a voice that didn't sound like me. "What is going on?"
"Ah, you're up," said Alice. "Sorry about tricking you like that."
I pushed myself up, feeling slightly off balance. My head felt sort of heavy, like something was pulling it back. "Tricking me?" I asked. I coughed, trying to clear my voice. "How did you..."
Alice took a mirror out of her pocket, and then I understood immediately. In the mirror was a relatively small person with grey hair fashioned in twin ponytails, and a small chest to match. The person had red eyes, long eyelashes, and a fairly thin stomach. Two black ribbons adorned the sides of this person's head, but otherwise the person was nude. This person was a female. This person was me.
I gasped. "What the..." I said, "Alice, what did you do to me? Why? How?"
She smirked. "Just my nature," she said. "Some time in the past, the vampire and succubus blood mixed, creating a sort of a super race. And just like all evolutionary theories, the mixture stomped out all the rest of the competitors. That's why you haven't heard any vampire stories as of late."
I blinked. "What the hell are you talking about?"
She walked next to me and started to apply some sort of ointment on my neck. I quickly pulled back, not wanting to know what she was doing.
"Relax," she said, "it's just rubbing alcohol. I tried to make the bite as soft as possible, but it's still a puncture wound."
I looked at the bottle, but there was no reason to doubt her. She had me in her corner now anyways.
"Go on," I said.
"Well," she said, "I guess you can see that I'm not quite either a vampire or a succubus. Sure, I can lure men like candy, but I don't eat them. I can't, to be more precise. See?" She flashed me a smile that showed what looked to be completely normal human teeth.
"Then what did you bite me with?"
Her incisors extended. "These," she said, letting them retract again. "That's something from the vampires. We still hunger for blood, but only a man's blood will satisfy us. And just like vampires, our victims turn into one of us. That is..."
"A girl," I said.
She nodded. "Since all succubus are female, so must our victims. So again, sorry for tricking you, but I just was hungry."
"You think I am going to forgive you?" I asked. "Do you have any idea how much you took away from me? I had such a great life going! My parents loved me, I was going to go to a great school, and I had to be the most popular kid in class!"
She smiled. "I don't care," she said. "I got my meal, and now we can see whether you'll be just that."
"Huh?" I asked.
Suddenly, my body went stiff. I fell onto my bed, and looked straight up.
She smiled. "Did you really think that was just rubbing alcohol?" she asked. "So gullible. Anyways, open up." She pulled open my mouth and opened a bottle. She poured some sort of liquid that looked like water.
But it wasn't water. As it pass down, I could feel it eating away at my esophagus. I wanted to scream, but my mouth wouldn't move.
"Holy water," she said. "Don't worry, it'll all be over soon."
My body began to convulse, and my vision blurred. I felt something trying to escape my body. Oh, of course. That was my soul. That was my life. If it left, I would melt to ash.
But perhaps that would be for the best. After all, I didn't want to live like this. I didn't want to be tricked. I didn't want to...
No. There's no purpose to dying. I'm going to live. I don't care what it takes. This won't be the end.
And then the last drop fell into my mouth. My vision cleared, and Alice took form. She was smiling, but not just like she had been before. She was proud.
"I guess you aren't as weak as the others," she said. She sat on my next to me on my bed. "I guess that makes you my new apprentice."
I tried to ask questions, but it wasn't any use. My body was still frozen.
"Don't worry," she said, "everyone protests at the start. I was kind of notorious for being extremely uncooperative. But everyone gives in."
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I walked into the prom with my long black dress. So many men were looking at me that I just had to blush. Of course, this sent their hearts into a flutter, just as I had hoped.
No, I can't say that I loved any of them. After all, did humans love the swine? Did the sharks love the fish? Of course not. They were just food, and that's all.
My shoulder ached a bit from where Alice had feasted earlier today. But that was nothing compared to the ache in my stomach. I was absolutely starving! At the start, it was just a little twinge, but with each meal Alice took, I could feel my hunger growing. I swore at the start that I'd never take blood from another human, but now it was beyond the point of control. Death wouldn't release me, so I had to take blood or suffer the torture for eternity.
I walked up to a boy named Keith. Oh, that triggered something in my brain. This boy used to be my best friend, didn't he?
I smiled. "Hey Keith," I said, "would you like to go out with me?"
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